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Post by stampededtyphoon on Jan 12, 2005 21:28:50 GMT -5
Hello from a stranger! After a family meeting, we all decided that this apartment was unlivable, that and Naraku was sick of Adagio eating roachs so we have decided to move, so we have been packing. We will resume all antics when we are settled in teh new place, until then CHEERS and Happy hunting!! Cyn *new and improved* How teh HELL did you know I was THINKING of ya', Cyn!?
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Post by stampededtyphoon on Jan 12, 2005 22:00:12 GMT -5
YES, this one AGAIN! [Maybe I can get it FINISHED this time, eh?] Goyjo wasn't really sure just WHERE he was dragging Miho off to, just so long as it was as FAR from that DAMNED HORNY WIZARD as POSSIBLE!! He was still steaming with anger when he was abruptly brought to a halt by teh girl he was trying to "protect" suddenly digging in her heels--as he turned to her, ready to scold Miho for puttting herself in "danger" with Darsches, he was greeted by teh sight of teh EQUALLY ANGRY Miho about to do teh SAME to him, but for a DIFFERENT reason altogether! "Who teh HELL do you THINK you ARE, Sha Goyjo!!!" she snapped, teh fire in her eyes making her even MORE gorgeous! "And WHAT teh HELL were YOU trying to DO to YOURSELF and your reputation, Miho!? Do you have ANY IDEA who that, that LECHEROUS "Gentleman" WAS!!!??" Goyjo yelled in return, STILL appalled at what she had been letting herself IN for! "Mis-TER Sha! I AM of age, like I TOLD you, and I can have ANY man I desire who DESIRES ME in return--YOU are NOT my Father, Boyfriend OR Big Brother, and THEREFORE, YOU have NO SAY about HOW or WHO with I spend my TIME, Remember!!??" "And I'M SAYING that if you want a "Good Time" THAT BADLY, little Girl, you could SURELY do BETTER for yourself than pick a man KNOWN for his "wuv Them and Leave Them" habits, that's ALL!" "Oh, and is THAT why you refused ME, because YOU'RE NO BETTER than Mr. Schneider, Goyjo!?" THAT remark HURT [mainly because it was TRUE!], and Goyjo, ALREADY angry and somewhat confused, just got ANGRIER! "All RIGHT, Little MISSY," he hissed--"You want a "Good Time", I'll make sure you HAVE a "Good Time"--GOYJO style, guaranteed or your MONEY BACK!!" And with THAT, Goyjo SCOOPED Miho up in his arms and started towards his Suite, too angry to CARE whether any of teh other guys might be there..!!! To be Continued--- Goyjo was so intent on what he was doing [What WAS he doing, anyway? went thru' teh back of his mind, only to be IGNORED!], that he didn't see teh small smile curling across Miho's lips..... "FINALLY!!!" she thought, "Finally I'm getting WHAT I wanted in teh FIRST and ONLY place! Goyjo, HIMSELF, just like I've DREAMED!" She shivered a bit in excited anticipation, wondering if he would be as gentle as she had heard he could be........ Goyjo was none too "gentle" with teh door of teh Suite, all but KICKING it open in his haste--a quick look around told him that teh other three weren't "home", THANK BUDDHA!, and it wasn't until he had reached teh door of teh bedroom he shared with Hakkai, that his brain finally caught up with his emotions-- "WHAT teh HELL am I DOING!?" he thought, suddenly feeling rather foolish, but when he looked down at teh woman--YES, WOMAN! Miho WASN'T a "Little Girl" any LONGER!--in his arms, her eyes looking at him seductively, her lips parted in anticipation--and he could FEEL her heart thudding with excitement!--he realized he WASN'T gonna say "No" to her again--He WANTED to make wuv to her, Good and Proper, in a way that she would NEVER forget! "If THIS is what she REALLY WANTS from me, then I want to "spoil" Miho for all other men, and give her SUCH a "Good Time", that she's a GRANNY before she goes looking for another!" he thought, ignoring teh lack of "logic" in that remark.......! He set her down on his bed very gently, and kissed her, long and well--then pausing only for a moment, waiting for her to catch her breath a bit, and looking into her eyes, asking without words if she REALLY wanted him to continue--she nodded, nervously but with a small smile--Goyjo began to kiss her neck, working his way down to her collar bone and knowing by her *gasps* of pleasure he was doing it JUUUUUUST right.......! He was unbuttoning her blouse, letting his kisses trail towards one of her lovely breasts, when Miho, flinging her head back in a gesture of utter "surrender", murmured-- "I always KNEW you would make my FIRST time something to REMEMBER without Shame, Goyjo.....!" He was concentrating so much on what he was doing [and THOROUGHLY enjoying himself], that it took a minute or two for teh significance of her words to sink in past teh testosterone....... Then Goyjo abruptly STOPPED what he was doing, and said numbly, "What!?" To be Continued--
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Post by Emi-chan on Jan 12, 2005 22:17:35 GMT -5
Then I guess he wouldn't find all those Star Wars novels real literature. teh authors of those said Star wars books aren't in a writing class in College now are they? Those two are depended on teh reader's prefrence. but some teachers like "well rounded" stories wehre character and plot developments are roughly even. At least thats my findings. teh writing classes in High School and College are to make sure you CAN write well rounded and original stuff. After you get through THAT then you can "take liberties" with other peoples characters as in teh above mentioned Star Wars books. THIS is why my high school writing teachers rarely put page limits on stuff. On occasion you'd get a "required lenght" but then it was on some research thing that is fairly easy to add and omit to put at teh length you want.
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Post by stampededtyphoon on Jan 12, 2005 22:26:43 GMT -5
No, but SOME of those "Star Wars" writers are making a LOT more MONEY than my Writing Prof!!!
All silliness aside, I KNOW that my writing is mostly "derivative", which is WHY I like writing HERE--AND it's more FUN than Writing Class was!
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Post by Emi-chan on Jan 12, 2005 22:58:14 GMT -5
A calmer part of his mind made Amon wonder HOW Zaizen had gotten so close without Amon sensing his presence like usual, and he realized it not only had something to do with teh Orbo loaded in Zaizen's gun, but that it was that very SAME Orbo that had been both troubling him while confounding and confusing his normally sensitive abilities...... Zaizen must have seen Amon's realization in his eyes, for he smiled and said-- "Yesss, Amon--It's a very SPECIAL KIND of Orbo--not only teh Purest available, but also unique in ANOTHER way--TRULY UNIQUE!" Amon remembered his other "encounter" with Pure Orbo, when Lucia had shot him with that Orbo-tipped arrow--it wasn't just teh physical pain it had caused that was so terrible, but rather teh SPIRITUAL Agony of all those Dead Witches, trapped in a liquid made from their OWN Blood-- Suddenly, Amon KNEW what made THAT Orbo now in front of him so VERY "Unique", INDEED!-- "It's distilled from WITCH HUNTERS!" he gasped, APPALLED at what this realization was TELLING him, NOT just about teh REAL purpose of teh Factory, but about teh entire Witch Hunter Organization!!! Zaizen smiled evilly--"How CLEVER of you to figure it out so QUICKLY, Witch! But, then, as a Former Witch Hunter YOURSELF, perhaps it was just obvious! Yes, THIS Orbo was made from teh Blood of Witch Hunters--Witches who THOUGHT they were "Safe" if they Hunted their Own kind like DOGS hunting down Wolves! But they were WRONG, Amon--VERY wrong!! Because, when their usefulness was over, or they got TOO "nosy" about what occurred behind teh walls of teh Factory, or maybe they just lost their Minds, like SO MANY of you Witches DO, they found they had One Last Service to "perform", One LAST "hunt" to go on.......Do you KNOW what happens to a Witch of YOUR "caliber", Amon, when given a shot of THIS Orbo directly into teh Brain...!?" Amon, aware that teh mere presence of this Orbo was not only suppressing his Powers, but also making it more and more difficult to even THINK clearly, could only manage to shake his head--He could ALREADY hear their SCREAMING, teh betrayed Witch Hunters crying out for someone to END their neverending Pain and Sorrow!!! "Oh, I haven't seen it MYSELF, Amon--not YET--but I understand that it's QUITE teh "show"--it drives a Powerful Witch MAD to teh point of Self-Destruction, turning their very Powers and Abilities AGAINST themselves, until they literally TEAR THEMSELVES APART, like a rabid animal consuming its own flesh!!" Amon swallowed, already KNOWING what was coming NEXT--and he also knew he would be HELPLESS to STOP it, his Mind and Soul already becoming more muddled and distracted by teh Terrible Orbo's close proximity--tortured Spirits were shrieking almost DIRECTLY into his head as it was! He wanted to ask that he at least be allowed to leave a note for Snap, something to let her know he had been thinking of her, even in teh end, but teh screams were drowning out all coherant thought from his mind even now-- "Get down on your KNEES, You Witch BASTARD!" snarled Zaizen, enjoying his victim's confusion and helplessness--he had waited a LONG TIME to "deal" with this PARTICULAR Witch Hunter, always PRETENDING Respect and Obedience, even while he was TOUCHING Touko, defiling her with his very EXISTANCE!!! He would have liked to have made teh Bastard CRAWL, and beg for Mercy, but there was too much chance of interruption-- Amon, now unable to do much else, slid off teh bench and onto his knees in teh icy snow, his fists clenched at his sides as teh continuing Pain caused by teh Special Orbo became even MORE intense when Zaizen pressed teh Orbo gun up against his forehead, just between and above Amon's eyes....... "I have One Last Question for you, Bastard Witch--did you SLEEP with my Daughter!? Is she now CONTAMINATED by your Vile Seed, like your OTHER Women!? Tell me teh TRUTH, you Son-of-a-Bitch, and I'll SPARE your Whores and their Spawn--it's only YOU that I want, anyway--Your Dead Carcass and My Precious Touko, Clean and Untouched by teh Tainted Blood of Witches!!!" "We-we were ONLY F-FRIENDS, Zaizen!" Amon managed to blurt out, his head an agony already! "I give you my WORD on THAT--I NEVER touched Touko in that way, because I KNEW what I was, and I DIDN'T want her to become involved in it all, teh Lies and Deception, teh Secrets that would only HURT HER!" Something about teh way he said that must've struck Zaizen as True, because he accepted it, giving Amon a look of surprise! HAD this Damned Witch really CARED about Touko after all, not just seeing her as a "tool" for creating more Witches......? Perhaps...But, no matter--a Witch must NOT be allowed to live, ESPECIALLY a Witch Hunter who had run away from his life of usefulness to Spawn yet MORE Witches!!! Zaizen's finger tightened on teh trigger....... To be Continued-- My story will pick up from here and go on from another perspective. I waited until NOW to do this so that I could see who was gonna do what.
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Post by Emi-chan on Jan 12, 2005 23:27:31 GMT -5
Chichiri had been trying to explain to Chris that not everyone in this world was human dispite how they may look. As well as about teh various clans. I was sitting just a little ways away watching them when I suddenly doubled over and nearly screamed holding my head in my hands. Immediately Chichiri knew what that ment and he was standing over me like a worried mother hen. "Whats wrong?" he asked. Chris nearly paniced and started teh incantation to go into my "inner heart" to clear me of any Maram that he thought had taken over me. But I held out my hand and shook my head weakly. "Pain... worry... Fear..." I said quietly as I tried to focus on anything. "Its... Amon, but I don't know what is causing..." Suddenly I felt as if I was being pulled away from myself and into a swirling darkness of pain, terror and an immense sense of betrayal. I could feel myself being pulled in and my body was becoming weak.
"Whats going on?" Chris asked in a near panic. Chichiri looked up and shook his head, mindlessly playing with his prayer beads. "Emi-chan has very STRONG empathic abilities... and I'm guessing she's sensing something from Amon. Something BAD, but I don't know what. This has never happened before. She can usually gain control of herself very quickly. "Hojoun... help..." I whispered as I tried to sense a way outta teh overwhelming pain, knowing that at any minute I would be hitting teh floor and passing out. Then I felt Chichiri sit next to me and wrap his arms around me. "Focus Emi... come on," he said quietly, and surprisingly calm as he stroked my hair.
After a few minutes I finally managed to sense something other than dispare and fear... I sense Chichiri's worry and wuv and desperately tried to grab it. Slowly teh pain ebbed and I became more aware of my surroundings, as well as Chris' confusion and worry which only helped me find my way back to myself. I smiled weakly. "Thanks, both of you," I whispered. Then I stood, only to be caught by Chichiri as I nearly fell down. "Take it easy, Emi-chan," he said calmly, but I could hear teh worry in his voice. I reached up and touched Chichiri's masked face and smiled. "I'll be fine... but Amon won't we hafta go to teh hotel... NOW," I said firmly, sounding stronger than I currently felt. "Chris... I think we may need your help as well." If Chris was confused before he was dumbstruck now. Even more so as Chichiri layed his cloak on teh ground and told Chris to "Get on." Once we were all on teh cloak Chichiri invoked teh spell and we were instantly transported to teh Hotel Courtyard where Amon was being threatened by Zaizen. Then a woman said something to Zaizen suddenly teh gun flew from Zaizen's hand and suddenly dissapeared.
Just as we were about to go to Amon Snap came rushing from teh hotel. Zaizen and Touku had gone off to one side and Chris suddenly pulled a pendant out from under his shirt and walked towards them, but I stopped him. "Wait just a second. He has something he has to say to his daughter before you do that, Chris," I explained. Chris nodded. Then when Zaizen began to cry Chris walked up to him and placed a hand on his shoulders. "Hello, sir. My name is Chris and I'm here to help you, if you want me to. I sense alot of maram comming from you, it could distroy you if I don't do something about it, sir." Zaizen didn't react to teh boy at all. But Touku, who was also crying, looked at Chris. "Do you really think you can help him? Please, if you can... do something." Chris looked at Touku and nodded. "Very well." Then he held out his right hand and said, "Na Sadaru Lotis Ran!" And everything in teh courtyard turned white... as it changed.
To be continued...
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Post by Emi-chan on Jan 12, 2005 23:57:59 GMT -5
Chris looked at Touku and nodded. "Very well." Then he held out his right hand and said, "Na Sadaru Lotis Ran!" And everything in teh courtyard turned white... as it changed. To be continued... When teh light faded Chris was no longer in teh hotel courtyard, but in a large, very sterile building. "Great... I wish I knew where I was. It would make this alot easier," Chris mumbled to himself. "Its teh factory," came a weak voice. Chris turned to see Amon and Snap standing to one side togather and Chichiri and I to teh other. "But... how? You... I don't understand, we're in Zaizen's inner heart, how could you be here as well. Unless you are destined to be Lotis masters as well," Chris explained completely dumbfounded how teh four of us could be here. Chichiri shook his head. "I told you, things are different here, Chris, noda. I assume that Snap is here because she is somewhat empathic and as such she is able to sense what is in peoples hearts... and Amon is here because of his link with her, noda. Emi-chan is here because of her Empathic abilities..." "And Chichiri is here because not only are he and I linked thanks to Tai Itsukun... but also because he is very good at helping people see teh good in almost any bad. Though sometimes he needs a little help himself," I said for Chichiri. "Any clue on how to find our way around here?" Snap asked hiding her confusion. Chris nodded. "If anything happens, stay behind me, adn stay in a group... I'm not as strong as some Lotis Masters, but if you are behind me I can protect you," Chris explained. He didn't move until all four of us nodded. Then Chris closed his eyes and said in a commanding voice, "Sama." (Lotis translation "path") Then most of teh lights in teh building turned off except for down one hall into teh heart of teh building. "Well, I guess thats our path." teh group headed down teh hallway but stopped when Amon suddenly faltered a few steps. Everyone turned to look at Amon. "Are you alright, Mr. Amon?" Chris asked sounding concerned. Amon nodded slightly, "I'm fine." Chris walked up to Amon and shook his head. "I don't know what was in that gun to make you so weak, Mr. Amon, but you are not 'fine'. Let me try something, if you'll allow me, sir." Amon just stood there with a blank expression on his face. So Chris turned to Snap to see what she had to say on teh matter. When Snap nodded Chris held out his right hand and said calmly "Jiva" (Lotis translation: Heal) and Amon was surrounded by a white light as teh lotis word took effect. teh only way you could tell it worked was teh surprise on Snap's face and teh tiny hint of surprise in Amon's eyes. As we followed teh path nothing else happened until we came to a room at teh end of teh hallways. In it was two figures on a bench. One stood up and faced teh group. It looked like Zaizen, only it was surrounded by a dark cloud of Maram. "Stay here," Chris said before he stepped forward and faced Zaizen. "You cannot win young Lotis. This man is lost to me forever, and I shall take you lot with me!" teh figure threatened. Chris stood there and said very calmly, "All I can do is try." teh Maram Zaizen growled before yelling "RAJIKA!" (Maram Translation: Death) and a dark smoke headed for us. Chris held his ground and immediately responded with "Kara!" (Lotis Translation: Protection) teh Dark smoke hit a glowing wall in front of Chris and wraped around all of us. Then before teh Maram Zaizen could ready another attack Chris yelled "Sakua!" (lotis translation: wisdom) followed by "Jeta!" (lotis translation: fight back) teh quick release of Chris' Lotis power was too much for teh Maram which dissapeared from teh room and Zaizen was left in a heap in teh floor of teh room. Chris walked over to Zaizen and said "jiva." And once teh glow from that word faded Zaizen looked to be mearly sleeping. "Here's to happier times, Mr. Zaizen. Rangu. (Lotis Translation: courage)" and with that teh glow of teh word became brighter than with teh others and we all found ourselves standing around a sleeping Zaizen and a confused Touku. Chris smiled as he explained, "You needn't worry. When he awakes he'll not remember what happened here in full but he will be who he was before teh Maram took over." As Chris turned to Chichiri and I, Amon stopped him. "What was that?" Chris looked up at Amon. "It is teh power of teh Lotis words. Anyone can use them, but it takes a master to go into someone's inner heart and clear them of any Maram, or darkness, that may be lurking there. And even though everyone has Maram in their hearts, we Lotis masters accept it and refuse to give into it." Amon nodded his understanding but said nothing. Chris walked (with a slight limp now) towards Chichiri and I, "Well, I guess my job here is done... lets return to teh house." Chichiri nodded as he laid out his cloak and after Chris and I stood on it we were transported home. End. I probably killed teh whole concept of teh Lotis and that... but its enough you know what it is... so I'm not complaining. and "Na Sadaru Lotis Ran" is teh incantation to go into a person's inner heart.
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Post by stampededtyphoon on Jan 12, 2005 23:58:57 GMT -5
Chichiri had been trying to explain to Chris that not everyone in this world was human dispite how they may look. As well as about teh various clans. I was sitting just a little ways away watching them when I suddenly doubled over and nearly screamed holding my head in my hands. Immediately Chichiri knew what that ment and he was standing over me like a worried mother hen. "Whats wrong?" he asked. Chris nearly paniced and started teh incantation to go into my "inner heart" to clear me of any Maram that he thought had taken over me. But I held out my hand and shook my head weakly. "Pain... worry... Fear..." I said quietly as I tried to focus on anything. "Its... Amon, but I don't know what is causing..." Suddenly I felt as if I was being pulled away from myself and into a swirling darkness of pain, terror and an immense sense of betrayal. I could feel myself being pulled in and my body was becoming weak. "Whats going on?" Chris asked in a near panic. Chichiri looked up and shook his head, mindlessly playing with his prayer beads. "Emi-chan has very STRONG empathic abilities... and I'm guessing she's sensing something from Amon. Something BAD, but I don't know what. This has never happened before. She can usually gain control of herself very quickly. "Hojoun... help..." I whispered as I tried to sense a way outta teh overwhelming pain, knowing that at any minute I would be hitting teh floor and passing out. Then I felt Chichiri sit next to me and wrap his arms around me. "Focus Emi... come on," he said quietly, and surprisingly calm as he stroked my hair. After a few minutes I finally managed to sense something other than dispare and fear... I sense Chichiri's worry and wuv and desperately tried to grab it. Slowly teh pain ebbed and I became more aware of my surroundings, as well as Chris' confusion and worry which only helped me find my way back to myself. I smiled weakly. "Thanks, both of you," I whispered. Then I stood, only to be caught by Chichiri as I nearly fell down. "Take it easy, Emi-chan," he said calmly, but I could hear teh worry in his voice. I reached up and touched Chichiri's masked face and smiled. "I'll be fine... but Amon won't we hafta go to teh hotel... NOW," I said firmly, sounding stronger than I currently felt. "Chris... I think we may need your help as well." If Chris was confused before he was dumbstruck now. Even more so as Chichiri layed his cloak on teh ground and told Chris to "Get on." Once we were all on teh cloak Chichiri invoked teh spell and we were instantly transported to teh Hotel Courtyard where Amon was being threatened by Zaizen. Then a woman said something to Zaizen suddenly teh gun flew from Zaizen's hand and suddenly dissapeared. Just as we were about to go to Amon Snap came rushing from teh hotel. Zaizen and Touku had gone off to one side and Chris suddenly pulled a pendant out from under his shirt and walked towards them, but I stopped him. "Wait just a second. He has something he has to say to his daughter before you do that, Chris," I explained. Chris nodded. Then when Zaizen began to cry Chris walked up to him and placed a hand on his shoulders. "Hello, sir. My name is Chris and I'm here to help you, if you want me to. I sense alot of maram comming from you, it could distroy you if I don't do something about it, sir." Zaizen didn't react to teh boy at all. But Touku, who was also crying, looked at Chris. "Do you really think you can help him? Please, if you can... do something." Chris looked at Touku and nodded. "Very well." Then he held out his right hand and said, "Na Sadaru Lotis Ran!" And everything in teh courtyard turned white... as it changed. To be continued... I am VERY INTRIGUED!
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Post by stampededtyphoon on Jan 13, 2005 0:02:48 GMT -5
When teh light faded Chris was no longer in teh hotel courtyard, but in a large, very sterile building."Great... I wish I knew where I was. It would make this alot easier," Chris mumbled to himself. "Its teh factory," came a weak voice. Chris turned to see Amon and Snap standing to one side togather and Chichiri and I to teh other. "But... how? You... I don't understand, we're in Zaizen's inner heart, how could you be here as well. Unless you are destined to be Lotis masters as well," Chris explained completely dumbfounded how teh four of us could be here. Chichiri shook his head. "I told you, things are different here, Chris, noda. I assume that Snap is here because she is somewhat empathic and as such she is able to sense what is in peoples hearts... and Amon is here because of his link with her, noda. Emi-chan is here because of her Empathic abilities..." "And Chichiri is here because not only are he and I linked thanks to Tai Itsukun... but also because he is very good at helping people see teh good in almost any bad. Though sometimes he needs a little help himself," I said for Chichiri. "Any clue on how to find our way around here?" Snap asked hiding her confusion. Chris nodded. "If anything happens, stay behind me, adn stay in a group... I'm not as strong as some Lotis Masters, but if you are behind me I can protect you," Chris explained. He didn't move until all four of us nodded. Then Chris closed his eyes and said in a commanding voice, "Sama." (Lotis word meaning "path") Then most of teh lights in teh building turned off except for down one hall into teh heart of teh building. "Well, I guess thats our path." teh group headed down teh hallway but stopped when Amon suddenly faltered a few steps. Everyone turned to look at Amon. "Are you alright, Mr. Amon?" Chris asked sounding concerned. Amon nodded slightly, "I'm fine." Chris walked up to Amon and shook his head. "I don't know what was in that gun to make you so weak, Mr. Amon, but you are not 'fine'. Let me try something, if you'll allow me, sir." Amon just stood there with a blank expression on his face. So Chris turned to Snap to see what she had to say on teh matter. When Snap nodded Chris held out his right hand and said calmly "Jiva" Sounds like teh Factory to me--NOT a nice place......!
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Post by ChibiMizuTenshi on Jan 13, 2005 0:24:56 GMT -5
Naruto? ...check...
Sakura? ...check...
Sasuke? ...check...
Kaka-sensei!? *tries to peek behind his mask again but is stoped by annoying bird flying over head* "A-hooo!!" *kills teh bird* Ahem...check...
Alright minna!! It's almost con time! ARE WE READY!?
everyone (except Kakashi who's reading and Sasuke who's being broody....which i guess would just be Naruto and Sakura...not everyone..hmmmm...*stops*) YOSH!!
Find us more Pixie Stixs! NOW!! Two bags is NOT gonna last!!
*ninjas fly off in all directions to complete mission*
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Post by Emi-chan on Jan 13, 2005 0:28:28 GMT -5
Sounds like teh Factory to me--NOT a nice place......! I said that it was teh factory... and I was cut off early when I tried to post that so there is more to it now. Sorry.
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Post by Emi-chan on Jan 13, 2005 0:30:56 GMT -5
Naruto? ...check... Sakura? ...check... Sasuke? ...check... Kaka-sensei!? *tries to peek behind his mask again but is stoped by annoying bird flying over head* "A-hooo!!" *kills teh bird* Ahem...check... Alright minna!! It's almost con time! ARE WE READY!? everyone (except Kakashi who's reading and Sasuke who's being broody....which i guess would just be Naruto and Sakura...not everyone..hmmmm...*stops*) YOSH!! Find us more Pixie Stixs! NOW!! Two bags is NOT gonna last!! *ninjas fly off in all directions to complete mission* me is not even Close to being ready Chib. I still barely have my costume done. but I'm using ALL of tomorrow for sewing and fighting with red and white cloth to finish it.
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Post by stampededtyphoon on Jan 13, 2005 0:33:29 GMT -5
Goyjo was so intent on what he was doing [What WAS he doing, anyway? went thru' teh back of his mind, only to be IGNORED!], that he didn't see teh small smile curling across Miho's lips..... "FINALLY!!!" she thought, "Finally I'm getting WHAT I wanted in teh FIRST and ONLY place! Goyjo, HIMSELF, just like I've DREAMED!" She shivered a bit in excited anticipation, wondering if he would be as gentle as she had heard he could be........ Goyjo was none too "gentle" with teh door of teh Suite, all but KICKING it open in his haste--a quick look around told him that teh other three weren't "home", THANK BUDDHA!, and it wasn't until he had reached teh door of teh bedroom he shared with Hakkai, that his brain finally caught up with his emotions-- "WHAT teh HELL am I DOING!?" he thought, suddenly feeling rather foolish, but when he looked down at teh woman--YES, WOMAN! Miho WASN'T a "Little Girl" any LONGER!--in his arms, her eyes looking at him seductively, her lips parted in anticipation--and he could FEEL her heart thudding with excitement!--he realized he WASN'T gonna say "No" to her again--He WANTED to make wuv to her, Good and Proper, in a way that she would NEVER forget! "If THIS is what she REALLY WANTS from me, then I want to "spoil" Miho for all other men, and give her SUCH a "Good Time", that she's a GRANNY before she goes looking for another!" he thought, ignoring teh lack of "logic" in that remark.......! He set her down on his bed very gently, and kissed her, long and well--then pausing only for a moment, waiting for her to catch her breath a bit, and looking into her eyes, asking without words if she REALLY wanted him to continue--she nodded, nervously but with a small smile--Goyjo began to kiss her neck, working his way down to her collar bone and knowing by her *gasps* of pleasure he was doing it JUUUUUUST right.......! He was unbuttoning her blouse, letting his kisses trail towards one of her lovely breasts, when Miho, flinging her head back in a gesture of utter "surrender", murmured-- "I always KNEW you would make my FIRST time something to REMEMBER without Shame, Goyjo.....!" He was concentrating so much on what he was doing [and THOROUGHLY enjoying himself], that it took a minute or two for teh significance of her words to sink in past teh testosterone....... Then Goyjo abruptly STOPPED what he was doing, and said numbly, "What!?" To be Continued-- "Miho.....Are you saying that you are a VIRGIN!?" Goyjo asked very quietly, and Miho--who didn't WANT him to stop that WONDERFUL thing he was doing!--answered with a pretty pout-- "Yes..........I don't understand, Goyjo--WHY did you STOP? What's WRONG!?" Goyjo, wanting to be angry at her again, but instead only feeling somehow "old" and tired and let down, answered in a low voice--"Miho, Honey--What's "wrong" is that......Well, I don't "do" Virgins....." Not quite believing what she was hearing, Miho smiled uncertainly--"You........you DON'T....?" "No, Miho.....and there's a reason for that--I may be a lecherous cad to MOST people, but I DO have my "standards", such as they ARE, and "counting coup" on Innocent and Inexperienced Young Virgins is NOT my style--it's just not RIGHT to take something so......Important....away from someone too naive to even KNOW what they're LOSING until it's too late.......Miho, PLEASE try to understand if you can--I've seen Young Women "RUINED" by horrible men who only wanted their bodies as a "notch" for their "collection", then discarded them like so much "trash", not CARING that their chances at a good marriage, a GOOD LIFE, were gone forever, lost in one night that teh Innocent Ones may not have even ENJOYED.........!" "But, Goyjo..." she began-- "No, Miho--I won't, I CAN'T do that to you, ESPECIALLY! You deserve BETTER, much better--and I WON'T ruin it for you, not even for what I suspect would've been a VERY "Good Time"....for BOTH of us....." "But, GOYJO!" she cried, tears beginning to flow freely from her eyes--"You DON'T understand! You're my LAST CHANCE, my ONLY chance, before.....before.....!" And, at this point, Poor Miho broke down completely, throwing herself into Goyjo's arms--"Before what, Miho..?" he asked, aware that SOMETHING was very wrong, indeed. "Before I am FORCED to marry a Demon who EATS his Brides on their Wedding Night--after RAPING them!!!!" wailed Miho, now finally telling him teh WHOLE story.... Goyjo felt his heart sink as he held teh crying young woman in his arms, stroking her hair, and wondering WHEN such atrocities would EVER end....! To be Continued......
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Post by stampededtyphoon on Jan 13, 2005 0:42:58 GMT -5
I said that it was teh factory... and I was cut off early when I tried to post that so there is more to it now. Sorry. I liked it a LOT, Emi-chan [kinda' made me feel "tingly" inside]--and it's a PERFECT "solution" to Zaizen's "problem".... Tomorrow I'll "finish up" teh loose ends of teh story.....
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Post by Emi-chan on Jan 13, 2005 1:07:02 GMT -5
I liked it a LOT, Emi-chan [kinda' made me feel "tingly" inside]--and it's a PERFECT "solution" to Zaizen's "problem".... Tomorrow I'll "finish up" teh loose ends of teh story..... Yeah. I thought it was fitting. and thought of it as soon as you started. to teh "Factory" thing. we didn't actually GO to teh factory, but Zaizen's inner heart looked like teh factory. Each person's inner heart is unique to that person and is a vast world in on its self with teh persons "inner self" located in a location that is familiar to them.
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